Propps for my Contents Page

In my contents page one of my classmates is wearing a White Ralph Lauren Polo, I feel that this would suit my magazine and its genre. The image was taken on a IPhone 4s camera in the green room in Cardinal Heenan school  

Updated Front Cover

Again I have edited my front cover and have lowered the contrast and gave it a black and white background, I have also Changed my text

Changes to Front cover

After criticism of my magazine front cover, I have edited my image and made it look not as stretched and gave it a clearer image

NME contents page for inspiration

I will be basing my magazine contents page on the layout of the average NME contents page such as this one, it will include similar codes and conventions as well

Updated Magazine Cover

This is my updated magazine front cover, I am still a few steps away from making my final draft

Update of Mock Up